Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III
(21-01-2023, 12:24 AM)krish_999 Wrote: Well, I had chopped down some parts during the final editing but there's not much difference in size. The unedited version had roughly 57 pages in the MS Word document and the completed version still has 51 pages. The part you read wasn't merely "10 pages". Perhaps you read it too fast LOL. The picture of the word count is here.
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And yes, I want to talk a little more about the story (not continuing though) like how it was supposed to be and how it finally became.  I am sure you'll be shocked. But this time I am going to admit that I have changed the way the story progressed toward the climax. The climax was changed from what I had thought of in the beginning (I am damn sure nobody will guess what I changed). But I will still not admit that it was entirely because of the readers' influence. Also, I didn't change it to shock you guys, and not to add a twist nobody was guessing. I will give my thoughts on that later. I need a little more time and comfort to pen those thoughts and I also wish to re-write my final chapter to make it a bit more coherent (I believe I had rushed a bit while writing it).
I haven't decided on giving an epilogue. But if I re-write it as I wish, then there won't be any need for the epilogue.
And last but not least, I need to thank you all readers for the love and support. I hope I will find time soon.
Thank you Krish for the reply. I apologise if any of my words were too harsh. Since you had told that last episode was of 57 pages and lengthier than any other previous episode. May be due to abrupt ending  we may have felt it was short and length was similar to 41 chapter. But any how chapter has ended now and we know the consequences. 
I just felt that the climax chapter had sudden end to the erotic saga. Going by current ending and age revelation of Meera 32 years., It looks like there won't be any part 4. Couple would settle with kids now. So wanted this chapter to be more erotic , tangy, detailed and thrilling. If you want to rewrite or eloborate last chapter kindly add these things. 

I differ with some people thoughts. Krish never told that he is changing the ending of last chapter. He told he will rewrite in more elaborate and detailed way. This is the end he had in his mind and since it was abrupt end he would correct it. I agree with him on this . Kindly go ahead Krish. 

Next point what he told was he would like to share his thoughts like what was his initial thinking of story , what influence readers and their comments had on his story. What was the climax he had taught of and what was actual. This he had done during "No one dies saint" also. If someone has not seen it's just after the last chapter in that series. Same can be done here also. This would help us to understand author much better way. I encourage author to do above 2 points. 

Finally these are my opinion and kindly others do not get offended by it. Author just want to do some corrections in last part without changing the ending and i too feel so , if this is the climax of erotic saga let it be very legendry. Also let author share his thoughts about the story , his initial thinking, influence of time span, where he was in two minds about next proceedings etc etc and express himself. 

Last but not the least thank you very very much Krish
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Chapter-1 - by krish_999 - 10-10-2020, 04:53 AM
RE: Chapter-1 - by Givemeextra - 10-10-2020, 11:00 AM
Chapter - 2 - by krish_999 - 17-10-2020, 01:04 AM
Chapter - 3 - by krish_999 - 23-10-2020, 11:52 PM
Chapter-5 - by krish_999 - 04-11-2020, 11:47 PM
Chapter - Six - by krish_999 - 12-11-2020, 07:57 PM
Chapter-7 - by krish_999 - 19-11-2020, 07:11 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 24-11-2020, 04:15 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 25-11-2020, 11:45 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 10:00 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 11:05 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III (Completed) - by The Last samurai - 22-01-2023, 07:09 AM



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