[hero123p]

Krish, Thanks for this wonderful story. Though I definitely wanted a happy ending of this story but it seems like a rushed end. Desai character has fallen just in few lines and that too not by Meera or Krish but Nidhi. Meera's character has flaws in last chapter. She was having morning sex with Desai even though she is not aware of well-being of Krish. In real life nobody does that if there is an iota of love. We get worried for loved once. Meera was also planning honeymoon kind of trip and then to meet Desai's mother. Yes Desai was planning but Meera was completely in tune. She has full plan to move on. The message I got is Meera was thinking Desai has changed and she is looking forward a new life with Desai and leaving Krish behind. She found Desai has not changed so she decided to stay with Krish. Lollypop for Krish is that she wanted him to move on. I think this was same excuse as in part-2. But there it looked real and I could feel that she really wanted to help Krish in part-2. Here she just wanted to dump him. Meera should know by this time that Leaving Krish is not a solution but treating Krish is. For that she needs to be with him.
I think we could have put same end little differently by putting more lines about
a. Meera in pain when she found Krish has left. She found how painful it is when Krish is not around even for few hours. Desai saw the restlessness of Meera and realized he is nowhere close.
b. Meera's confrontation with Desai (instead honeymoon planning) about the girl he had sex. She definitely knows when Krish is lying and when not. Nidhi is not required to reveal the truth. Meera just trust Krish.

One thing I like is Krish did not give up. Very difficult but he tried again.
One thing I miss is Krish always gives a fitting reply at the end. Here Desai has left almost unpunished. Desai must be laughing outside.

Also one other thing this chapter proves that Desai is simply god of sex. Meera and Nidhi forget everything when having sex with him. I would not be surprised if they invite Desai for a threesome in the future. How would Meera get satisfied by Krish when she knows better pleasure is possible? That is where I wanted Meera to completely go with Desai and realize that pleasure has a cost associated with it. How difficult it is to live with Desai (womanizer + possessive). May be after that realization, Meera and Krish should have come together. More loving and caring to each other realizing what mistakes they have made. Lessons which are taught by life are sometimes hard but stay with you life long.

Once you asked what should you write next. I would say 'Adutrey'. Thriller I don't like. Incest you will write so good that many would start living that (not good at all).

Will miss your writing but I hope you start writing soon. Bye till then.

This portal is another pain now. I don't know if it will survive till then.