18-01-2023, 10:44 PM
I do not want to judge too harshly or 'like a hunter who shoots at luck with a shotgun into the forest and
hopes to catch some birds'; to possibly describe Meera's and Krish's role and culpability in dealing with
Desai or to filter out the main culprit.
This story reflected much more than the fantasies of a middle-class marriage and partnership.
It also showed us, among other things, the fragility of a relationship when the main characters involved
(in the story they appear as Meera and Krish) take much of their relationship "for granted" and do not
nurture it, ferener invest for its happiness, security and harmony.
Krish (the author) has held the mirror of the real society in front of our eyes with this story too,
so that we could look deep into it.
How many of us have thought about similar cases and fates that happen everyday in our surroundings?
Hardly or not at all !
... And for that I would like to express my gratitude to him.
Meera's reaction at the end ?
I had expected it that way !
Her silence and introversion showed us how ashamed she was and how much she was suffering.
A verbal attack or getting into an argument with Desai had led to both Meera and Krish finding
themselves in the defender position, leaving the field and initiative to Desai.
That would be the mental ruin for both and the crowning victory for Desai...
Krish with his heart and loyalty (sincerity and fidelity)
Meera with her warmth and love (remorse and harmony)
have found each other again in the end.
... And that was and is good...
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
((I don't think Krish is thinking about a continuation in a fourth part "told from Meera's point of view".
That would be the crowning glory for this story.
"I MISS MEERA AND KRISH ALREADY!"
As they say; ,,Hope never dies!"
Who knows, maybe one day Krish *the author* will take his heart in his hand and start again...))
hopes to catch some birds'; to possibly describe Meera's and Krish's role and culpability in dealing with
Desai or to filter out the main culprit.
This story reflected much more than the fantasies of a middle-class marriage and partnership.
It also showed us, among other things, the fragility of a relationship when the main characters involved
(in the story they appear as Meera and Krish) take much of their relationship "for granted" and do not
nurture it, ferener invest for its happiness, security and harmony.
Krish (the author) has held the mirror of the real society in front of our eyes with this story too,
so that we could look deep into it.
How many of us have thought about similar cases and fates that happen everyday in our surroundings?
Hardly or not at all !
... And for that I would like to express my gratitude to him.
Meera's reaction at the end ?
I had expected it that way !
Her silence and introversion showed us how ashamed she was and how much she was suffering.
A verbal attack or getting into an argument with Desai had led to both Meera and Krish finding
themselves in the defender position, leaving the field and initiative to Desai.
That would be the mental ruin for both and the crowning victory for Desai...
Krish with his heart and loyalty (sincerity and fidelity)
Meera with her warmth and love (remorse and harmony)
have found each other again in the end.
... And that was and is good...
In this sense
All the best
Lollobionda
((I don't think Krish is thinking about a continuation in a fourth part "told from Meera's point of view".
That would be the crowning glory for this story.
"I MISS MEERA AND KRISH ALREADY!"
As they say; ,,Hope never dies!"
Who knows, maybe one day Krish *the author* will take his heart in his hand and start again...))