Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

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Coming to your writing Krish we can divide into two parts pros and cons.
First start with pro:
As already said in last comment very dedicated for the story , u got frustrated, confused but u never gave up and completed it hats off to that. U have great skill as writer and very few posses that. U can take it as parallel profession and try to author some books. Ur writing reminds me of Chetan Bhagat. The twist u create at the end of every update and keep readers on toes for next update it's genius trick very few can execute. U r master of erotic drama or fiction. All the very best.

Cons :
1) this also i have already said. U should decide when to give in for reader wish and when u should not. This is very important point this will make a story legend or ordinary one. Both the time I felt u missed it. U could have done much better.
2) commitment to time and target date is very bad. We understand difficulties. I worked with Japanese people where time is money. So best thing is to meet your time commitment or if it's difficult to meet tell well in advance such the other person or readers will not keep waiting and finally feel dissatisfied. This will definitely work in professional life too try it out. -  What was that? As if he doesn't know what a commitment means
3) Giving update at late hours , initially I taught u were working at different timeline may be in some abroad location resulting in late night updates.  But in last two chapters realised u r also in Indian time line. So this is very bad waking up all night for giving update, this will not only effect ur physical health but also impact ur mental health too. This will also effect ur writing and thinking capabilities. Not only that for your update many readers also keep awake during nights , even wake up in night to check updates. This will effect readers health as well. Giving update on Sunday late night , people wake up in night to read it and Monday morning is office day and people attend it with sober face. - Do you realize that every one has family,kids, parents maybe in the house, when you need to write a story you need to be alone and only can happen when all of them sleep..you cannot wait late night for a story then it is your problem don't crib on it. Calling out for late night updates is too much. Who asked you to wait late night for updates, you can sleep and read next day. He is not a professional writer and instead of being grateful for him staying all night to give an update you are writing cons?
4) since u are master writer u influence people thoughts so I know what should be done related to this

Last story also u responded after reading comments ur taught process and what plan u had for that story. Here also we hope the same. After that take some gap enjoy ur personal life and family life. U ended the " knowing my series on good note " don't restart it with part 4. Meera is already 32 let them have kids and live happily ever after. Kindly update if you are planning something. As i remember u told not incest theme but it's a thriller  erotic story. This time I don't want to get attached but will read only after it ends ha ha ha ha. Some one rightly said if possible share the pdf copy of this story. We don't belive this website don't know when it might shut down.

Anyways thank you very very much and all the very best for future. Will definitely miss xossipy , most intelligent villian Desai , most beautiful and desiring Meera and finally Krish reason for this very story

Finally will definitely Miss you author Krish.

Thanks and regards

The Last Samurai

I appreciate your thoughts on the story but please keep it to yourself when it comes to personal comments on timings on updates and late nights. There are many writers here who do not bother to even comment or continue story for months maybe you deserve them.