18-01-2023, 09:21 PM
(This post was last modified: 18-01-2023, 11:33 PM by The Last samurai. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Coming to your writing Krish we can divide into two parts pros and cons.
First start with pro:
As already said in last comment very dedicated for the story , u got frustrated, confused but u never gave up and completed it hats off to that. U have great skill as writer and very few posses that. U can take it as parallel profession and try to author some books. Ur writing reminds me of Chetan Bhagat. The twist u create at the end of every update and keep readers on toes for next update it's genius trick very few can execute. U r master of erotic drama or fiction. All the very best.
Cons :
1) this also i have already said. U should decide when to give in for reader wish and when u should not. This is very important point this will make a story legend or ordinary one. Both the time I felt u missed it. U could have done much better.
2) commitment to time and target date is very bad. We understand difficulties and family limitations. Best thing is to meet your time commitment or if it's difficult to meet tell well in advance such the other person or readers will not keep waiting and finally feel dissatisfied.
3) Giving update at late hours , initially I taught u were working at different timeline may be in some abroad location resulting in late night updates. But in last two chapters realised u r also in Indian time line. So this is very bad waking up all night for giving update, this will not only effect ur physical health but also impact ur mental health too. This will also effect ur writing and thinking capabilities.
4) since u are master writer u influence people thoughts so I know what should be done related to this
Last story also u responded after reading comments ur taught process and what plan u had for that story. Here also we hope the same. After that take some gap enjoy ur personal life and family life. U ended the " knowing my series on good note " don't restart it with part 4. Meera is already 32 let them have kids and live happily ever after. Kindly update if you are planning something. As i remember u told not incest theme but it's a thriller erotic story. This time I don't want to get attached but will read only after it ends ha ha ha ha. Some one rightly said if possible share the pdf copy of this story. We don't belive this website don't know when it might shut down.
Anyways thank you very very much and all the very best for future. Will definitely miss xossipy , most intelligent villian Desai , most beautiful and desiring Meera and finally Krish reason for this very story
Finally will definitely Miss you author Krish.
Thanks and regards
The Last Samurai
First start with pro:
As already said in last comment very dedicated for the story , u got frustrated, confused but u never gave up and completed it hats off to that. U have great skill as writer and very few posses that. U can take it as parallel profession and try to author some books. Ur writing reminds me of Chetan Bhagat. The twist u create at the end of every update and keep readers on toes for next update it's genius trick very few can execute. U r master of erotic drama or fiction. All the very best.
Cons :
1) this also i have already said. U should decide when to give in for reader wish and when u should not. This is very important point this will make a story legend or ordinary one. Both the time I felt u missed it. U could have done much better.
2) commitment to time and target date is very bad. We understand difficulties and family limitations. Best thing is to meet your time commitment or if it's difficult to meet tell well in advance such the other person or readers will not keep waiting and finally feel dissatisfied.
3) Giving update at late hours , initially I taught u were working at different timeline may be in some abroad location resulting in late night updates. But in last two chapters realised u r also in Indian time line. So this is very bad waking up all night for giving update, this will not only effect ur physical health but also impact ur mental health too. This will also effect ur writing and thinking capabilities.
4) since u are master writer u influence people thoughts so I know what should be done related to this
Last story also u responded after reading comments ur taught process and what plan u had for that story. Here also we hope the same. After that take some gap enjoy ur personal life and family life. U ended the " knowing my series on good note " don't restart it with part 4. Meera is already 32 let them have kids and live happily ever after. Kindly update if you are planning something. As i remember u told not incest theme but it's a thriller erotic story. This time I don't want to get attached but will read only after it ends ha ha ha ha. Some one rightly said if possible share the pdf copy of this story. We don't belive this website don't know when it might shut down.
Anyways thank you very very much and all the very best for future. Will definitely miss xossipy , most intelligent villian Desai , most beautiful and desiring Meera and finally Krish reason for this very story
Finally will definitely Miss you author Krish.
Thanks and regards
The Last Samurai
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