17-01-2023, 08:54 AM 
		
	
	
		The story has suddenly moved fast. The seduction should have been slow and steady from bheem. You have made her take the first step like a prostitute. She should have made to fall in love with bheem first based on his caring and then given herself to him.
	
	
	
	
	

 
 

 

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