Adultery என் கலாப காதலன்

[Losliyafan]

Good attempt definitely.

Agree with @kanavudevathai

Make the readers travel with you like a journey. Do not forcefully add sex scenes.
Lot of questions come in while reading the story, for example
1. After allowing her to study, why did the husband did not accompany her to college.
2. As the husband posted in the same town, how come no one knows about him
3. Vinoth is not in a big post, he is just a low cadre. why he is not caring or asking about college and how the studies going etc. Is he not helping her to find a goverment teacher job.
4. They just fuck and sleep and dont talk at all.
5. In this 6 months of marriage, what she knew about her husband her likes and dislikes about him. Did he care him on her. How is the husband family treating her. Are they torturing her why no baby yet
6. Are they staying in quarters or apartment or individual house. About neighbours and with whom she interact after college hours.
7. Is she in social media. Will she take selfie. Does her husband like wearing saree or modern dress.
8. Did she see more movies and want love marriage. Is this marriage is forced by her parents. Did she have any other plans?
9. Who are the close friends of Meera with whom she talks often. Does she have a sibling.
10. What made kavitha talk this much about Meera and Raj even after knowing that Meera is married.

I dont expect answer for all these. But, just to let you know what i thought reading this.