Romance BESHARAM by entertainerjatt - ( Completed)

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HaNi360
nice update dibya sam ko khud se door rakhna chahti hai ishi lie shimla ka project thama diya koi nai apna hiro bhi kam nahi kuchh na kuchh jugad kar hi lega aur neha new character iska intro to apne karaya hi nahi mujhe lagta hai sam ki diwani jaroor hogai hai o bhi pahli najar me mujhe to lagta hai jab neha ne sam ko handsome kaha to dibya ko jalan jaroor hui hogi ek requires hai ap se ki sam ko toor pe bhejo shimla o bhi neha ke sath to maja ajay baki aap jano story mast ja rahi hai lage raho boss

entertainerjatt

Thanks bhai...aur bhai Neha ki into chahiye toh next update mein daal deta hun...aur ab yeh toh time hi batayega k dono mein kya khichdi pakne wali hai...

Originally Posted by Hitesh.soni1

Shandaar story bhau.... Ek or karnama....

Plot bahut shandaar hai.... But story kahi par speed me ja rahi hai, or kahi paar bilkul slow....
But intresting hai.... Reading ka maza aa gaya....

entertainerjatt
Thanks bhai...aur main kosish karunga k main yeh problem dur kar sakun...baki ap bane rahiye aur batate rahiye...