07-01-2023, 07:38 AM
Great work. Keep going.
Suggestion:
When she walked on the other side of tree away from prying eyes. Salman should have offered his boxers to her to at least cover something. On insisting, he should have removed it and try to hand it over to her from behind the tree. Then, he kept it on the ground, on the side of tree so that she can take it. She doesn't take it. But Rest of the conversation could have happened with both stand naked on both sides of the tree.
Suggestion:
When she walked on the other side of tree away from prying eyes. Salman should have offered his boxers to her to at least cover something. On insisting, he should have removed it and try to hand it over to her from behind the tree. Then, he kept it on the ground, on the side of tree so that she can take it. She doesn't take it. But Rest of the conversation could have happened with both stand naked on both sides of the tree.