Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III
As someone said Krish has successfully killed this story with this one episode. The reasons Meera said made me laugh. I can't believe Krish has written an episode like this. I think it's because growing pressure from readers to complete story whatever maybe the end. They just wanted it to end. It's been already 2+ years this story started with many long long gaps of 3,4 months. This made author Krish too complete the story as soon as possible. That urgency to complete this story is clearly seen in this episode. That's why he went back to previous chapters and found Jai episode as a second reason as we reader are not expecting it. Krish was more knee on giving those unexpected twists than the story line. This addiction to give twists in every chapter had effected his story telling in my opinion. That's why an episode like this.

Other day Meera says whatever happens he can't live without Krish..that she would rather die instead of leaving Krish for another man. And in the morning conversation during temple visit also she was so sure about her feelings about Desai and vice versa. And suddenly in the evening it was a complete turn around. Leaving Krish is somewhat acceptable. But what she did with Desai is complete fucked up writing from author. Krish wrote that sex scene just because there's so much pressure from readers to make Krish watch Meera Desai having sex live. For that reason author fucked up the entire story.

How can someone say she would die rather leaving with another person and next day willingly submitting to another person. Not only submitting and even ready to marry and bear his child? That's complete rubbish writing Krish. Not expected this type of nonsensical update from you...not even in our dreams. By this one episode you made whatever Meera said till now about their marriage and love had no value at all. If there's no value at the end to what the characters are saying throughout the entire story i don't understand why to write them in the first place? Only to give that unexpected twist at the end i guess.
I hope you will overcome this thing in your future writings.
Waiting to know more about the ending conclusion of the story.

But have to your writing skills for sure Krish. I strongly suggest you to pursue a writing career in main stream movie industry or as a novelist atleast. Skills like this exceptional writing can't be limited to xossipy. There's a need for writers like you out there Krish. I hope you will consider my request.
All the best for your future writings and i Wish You and Your Family A Happy Healthy And Prosperous New Year ???
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Chapter-1 - by krish_999 - 10-10-2020, 04:53 AM
RE: Chapter-1 - by Givemeextra - 10-10-2020, 11:00 AM
Chapter - 2 - by krish_999 - 17-10-2020, 01:04 AM
Chapter - 3 - by krish_999 - 23-10-2020, 11:52 PM
Chapter-5 - by krish_999 - 04-11-2020, 11:47 PM
Chapter - Six - by krish_999 - 12-11-2020, 07:57 PM
Chapter-7 - by krish_999 - 19-11-2020, 07:11 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 24-11-2020, 04:15 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 25-11-2020, 11:45 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 10:00 AM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by Bhavana_sonii - 15-12-2020, 11:05 PM
RE: Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III - by The phoenix - 01-01-2023, 05:46 PM



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