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Adultery मेरी पेहेलवान बीवी वैशाली और उसके वासना (complete)
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To aakhir mein idris ki kismat buland ho he gayi .. aur vaishali bhi apne pati ki zidd ke aage haar maan gayi .. par kya is negro ko aage mauka milega firse pehelwan biwi ko pelne ka ...

Nice update but spelling mistakes bahut hai .. ye padhne ka maja kharab karti hai .. agar typing ya convert karne mein output sahi nahi mil raha to zaroori nahi ki hindi mein he post karna hai update .. roman fonts ko use karke hindi mein he liko ...

Kahani ka content maayne rakhta hai naaki format .. comtent to romanchak hai bas ye typing error he padhte waqt ungli kar rahe hai .. he he

Aur dusri baat ye ki .. agar ho sake to update ko thoda detail ke saath likho kahani ko jaldi aage mat badhao .. waise bhi jo kalpana shabdo se banti hai uspar photo khare nahi utarte hai .. reference ke liye hotel ki chhat dikha dete ye bandi ka photo vaishali ke character ke saath insaaf nahi kar paaye ...

Meri baato ka bura na maan-na .. jo laga wo bata diya .. baaki kahani to badhiya hai he ...
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RE: मेरी पेहेलवान बीवी वैशाली और उसके वासना - by xfirefox - 27-12-2022, 09:30 AM



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