26-12-2022, 01:35 PM
(26-12-2022, 01:15 PM)Desmond Miles Wrote: Liked the start. Humble request, please don't make it a forced or bang story, even for the first time sex. It will just be another boring story then..
You can use more teasing, situations, double meaning talks, slips etc.. And the heroine slowly falls to the trap. Thats what every reader prefers.. Hope you like the same way.. Good luck and Merry Christmas!
ok sure thansk for the suggestion