Adultery Dost Ke Papa Aur Meri Mummy (completed)

[Chandan]

Ye saari kartoot arun ke baap ki kari dhari hai aur isme sabse badi galti khud varsha ki hai .. jo isne arun ke baap par bharosa kiya aur fir fir pyaar mein pad kar apni izzat lutwa rahi hai .. muzhe nahi lagta ki ye matter yahi tak seemit rehne wala hai .. jald he ye sudhakar aur ramesh varsha ka galat faayda uthayenge ...

Khair jo bhi ho .. kahani hai he varsha ki barbaadi ki .. ab to muzhe is bechari par taras aane laga hai .. kyonki ye pagal aurat aaj to apne pati ke bharose ka nazayaj faayda utha rahi hai magar kal jab usko pata lagega to vasha ka kya hoga .. kyonki ye aurat jis rah chal di hai us aur sirf barbaadi aur bezzati ke alawa aur kucch nahi milega ...

Ab jo boya hai uska fal to bhugatna padega he ...

Nice story .. likha bhi accha hai .. sab kucch kaafi details mein .. bas mera ek chhota sa suggestion hai ki erotic ness accha daalte ho but wohi repeat hote hote thoda monotomy si aa rahi hai .. just my view don't percieve it in a negetive sense .. rest everything is smooth and sound .. so keep it up

Bilkul sahi kaha aapane .. let's see what happens