18-12-2022, 11:30 AM
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(18-12-2022, 11:14 AM)Ajanmol Wrote: Bhut badhiya update @rodrigo bhai par bhai mujhe laga ye bhut jaldi ho gaya ....kamini ko itni jaldi ye sab mai mat karo...uske andar bhut si jhijhak abhi baaki honi chahiye.....or ek req yeh hai ki apne message ke comment pe ek user ka message likha tha jo dabang tarike se message likh ke bheja tha (saali ****book par apne navi ka photo daalti hai ) is character ko aap laa sakte hai or ye mujhe dominating nature bhi laga...kyoki ravi autowala mujhe dominator nahi laga or agar kamini ko koi dominator handle karega to story or jyada ghatak ban jaayegi....baaki yeh mera personal view hai baaki aapka iccha....aap bhut sahi writer hai ..
Bhai aurat ko kholne ke liye mujhe ye jaroori tha...aur sabne mujhe kaha ki ek hi character rakha jaae...aage aage Ravi bhi dominate kar skta hai..dekho..kya hota...aur baat cheet jada ho to kahani thodi boring ho jaati hai..aur bhai ek gharelu aurat kabhi bhi pehle se hi dominating insaan se baat nahi karegi...