Adultery Be Sure What You Plan For by Tantrik721

[khemucha]

Sorry, but this is dishonest writing ... the plot hatched by the wife was all good ... but the narration of what went dont on Halloween night was dishonest and narration did not make sense ... her discovery and reaction did not make sense ... it seemed a blatant attempt at misleadong the reader ... how could they know they were being watched ... so why the drama enacted ... that whole scene should have been done differently ... but guess the writer took too many shortcuts ... and ...

... the switch to calling the guy home is way too far fetched ...

a great plot executed tardly ...