Misc. Erotica Wrong number ...kaccha pakka badam

[Therocksayys]

Mai aaj apna chota sa jeevan parichay  dena chahta ho ise dhayan se pade ...

Jab mai xossip  par aaya to ye site pata nahi kaise open hue ...aur mai 1 ya 1.5 sal se kahani bus padta tha...

Aur koi jab update likhna band kar deta tha mujhe bhi bahot gussa aata tha....

Aur maine is xossip par id banayi aur kahanj ke cmmt dene laga ...bada accha lagta jab writer cmmt ka reply deta ...

Kuch story band hue jo bahot Shandar thi ....

To maine socha ki mai bhi likho ap logo ne dekha hoga ki mai nazbeen ka carecter zyada kahani mai likhta ho nam.nazbeen ka


Ye nam se mujhe bahot lagav hua par woh mai nahi bata paonga kyo ...

Aur maine bus maze ke liye nazbeen bahak gayi 4 line likh kar shuru kar di....mai bus nazbeen ko sirf sex sex sex ke liye likhna chahata tha jaha koi story nahi bus thoda seduce phir sex hi sex diffrent diffrent tarike se.....

Waise shuru bhi kari ...par pata nahi maine nazbeeen bahak gayi ko novel mai change kar diya .. Aur uska end aakhir kara



Par jo mai likhna chahata tha likh na paga...aise hi iram...sumbool.jiska nam.intizar kab tak karenge hum.bhala jaha ek writer ne chhod diya use badaya ...aur bhi kahani ko badaya ....

Par nazbeen ka nam bar bar soch kar mai jo kahani likhta jisme sex ke ilwa kuch na ho ...mai likh nahi paya aaaj tak


Nazbeen aur afreen bhi aise hi kahani hai jo chal rahi hai ....

Par woh bhi maine reder ke dawab mai immotion aur story add kar di.....

Kintu jo kafi salo se nazbeen ki mere soch thi zaroor likhonga..

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Mai jab likhonga to bhale cmmt mile na mile likhta chala jao.ga jaha sirf sex ke ilwa kuch na hoga ....sab  se karonga amir garib sab se ....

Tab jab woh mai likh paya woh mere aakhiri kahani hogi....

Mai apne man ka kabhi likh hi nahi paya .....

Isi karan sabse tez update deta ho ki reder update ke liye pareshan na ho ...ha 1 ya 2 ya 3 din tak update nahi aaye to samjh lana mai busy ho aur bahot long gape ho jai tab samjhna kahani mere flop ho gayi to band kar di ...

Ungli thak jati hai deemag kharab ho jata hai naye naye idea aur naye naye sex diolouge likh te hue ....

Mai koi writer nahi bus ap logo ke liye likhta ho aur jab bahot zyada negative baate karte hai to bura lagta mai mujhe kon sa paisa mil raha hai khani likhne ka

Pehle toh dil se maafi maango ga agar apko hurt kiya. Mera intention woh bilkul nahi tha. Beshak ap aek akele writer ho jo updates regular aur huge updates dete ho. Maine kisi aur writer ko itne quick updates dete abhi tak nahi dekha. 

Lagta hai mein thora theek apni soch ko explain nahi kar paya is story ko leke. Main bas itna keh raha tha k bohat dafa bohat se characters ke scenes aek saath chal rahe hote hain k hame connect karna mushkil ho jata hai aur phir writer bhi kuch time baad isi confusion mein story chor deta hai k kis par ab story ko focus karoon. 

Pata nahi apne parha hai nahi is forum ki kuch kahaniya jaha jawan bahu par story shuru hoti hai aur phir writer 1 sex k baad saari story sass par shift kar deta hai aur phir agle 3 mahino tak sass par hi story chalti rehti hai. 

Yeh story bohat shandaar aur kamal ki hai aur bas mein is khoobsurat story ko beech mein adhura chhut te hue nahi dekh sakta is liye apna feedback de diya. Bas yeh last wale update ko parh kar shabana wala aek dam se story ko Sanam aur Saman se shift hota hua mehsoos kiya toh keh di apne dil ki baat. 

Again agar meri baato se hurt hue toh I’m sorry. Baaki apki marzi. 

——— Sanam aur Saman ki yeh adhuri kahani hamesha yaad rahe gi ———