03-12-2022, 06:27 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-12-2022, 08:31 AM by Therocksayys. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Bro please try not to involve all the characters at once. Kuch samajh hi nahi aata kis ko imagine kare. Aisa lag raha hai 3 stories aek saath chal rahi hai. Ab ye Shabana ko itni jaldi involve karna kuch maza nahi aaya. Poori khichdi ban Jati hai story ki. Aek dam se aisa lagne lagta hai k poora khadan koi randi khana hai.
Apne kaha tha k ye kahani do behno par hogi aur bakio se alag hogi lekin phir se wohi same lag raha hai is last update ko parh kar. Ye maa ko involve karna mujhe pasand nahi aaya.
Apki har story ki adhoori rehne ki wajah bhi mujhe yehi lagta hai ke isme itna kuch aek saath chal raha hota hai k samajh hi aati ab kis par focus ho.
As a reader review dena mera haq hai. Aur hum apki writing ko bohat pasand karte hain isi liye khud ko rok nahi paya apko apni feelings batane k liye.
Apne kaha tha k ye kahani do behno par hogi aur bakio se alag hogi lekin phir se wohi same lag raha hai is last update ko parh kar. Ye maa ko involve karna mujhe pasand nahi aaya.
Apki har story ki adhoori rehne ki wajah bhi mujhe yehi lagta hai ke isme itna kuch aek saath chal raha hota hai k samajh hi aati ab kis par focus ho.
As a reader review dena mera haq hai. Aur hum apki writing ko bohat pasand karte hain isi liye khud ko rok nahi paya apko apni feelings batane k liye.
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