21-11-2022, 12:45 PM
(21-11-2022, 10:10 AM)RCF Wrote: Nice update, Writing is top notch but the plot for me is a huge turnoff. It would have been an awesome read if Mother is not made as an evil women who feeds her babies to the devil and seduction of two daughters would have been the hard work of Jason.
I appreciate the analysis, but let's just say that Jason already did the hard work while he was getting Kavita and now Asha came as an additional reward to him.
Hope I amuse you in further chapters. Be tuned