29-05-2019, 02:22 PM
salesman91-
Hi massalaman..
(Right now i dont want her to come out of trap) but soon..(story should cont... there after too in diffrent angle....)
I have some idea to share with...
1::when she c's its aasma's appartment then she is shocked(obviously) now after that she knows::: "that" may b his husband....then from here she become furious...(gusse me aadmi apna buddhi bhrasht kar leta hai).
2::So from here u can do like may b (just an opinion) she become more slutty...or u can add some thriller here with some murder...in that apartment may b aasma khan or om...or someone annonymous(she doent know about)...and she will b trapped again...cuz her finger print is all over the place....(it wud really spiced up the story)
Just my thoughts:
may b she is bein taken advantage by someone else too.(its time to add new character)
Hi massalaman..
(Right now i dont want her to come out of trap) but soon..(story should cont... there after too in diffrent angle....)
I have some idea to share with...
1::when she c's its aasma's appartment then she is shocked(obviously) now after that she knows::: "that" may b his husband....then from here she become furious...(gusse me aadmi apna buddhi bhrasht kar leta hai).
2::So from here u can do like may b (just an opinion) she become more slutty...or u can add some thriller here with some murder...in that apartment may b aasma khan or om...or someone annonymous(she doent know about)...and she will b trapped again...cuz her finger print is all over the place....(it wud really spiced up the story)
Just my thoughts:
may b she is bein taken advantage by someone else too.(its time to add new character)
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