29-05-2019, 02:16 PM
johndoe7today-
Excellent updates masalaman, each of those gems is excellent...
But poor Nilanjana is being harassed to the extremities, try being a little kinder, I pity this fictional woman.
By the way, I would suggest that when you want to end this story, please do it in such a way that the tables turn and Nilanjana has an upper hand somehow. I know it is difficult, but it must be just another challenge to your ingenious mind; just make sure that Nilanjana wins this war, and maybe you can make Vicky, Rohit and Ustad die a horrible, painful death, something like them getting their balls crushed or cut or something like that. Especially because you soon plan to include KumKum too in the problem, two women can defeat three men in this battle of wits, right?
Also, once kumkum gets involved, I am sure there is no obligation for Nilanjana to continue subservience. She is doing all this only for Kumkum, she'll not care anymore about whatever her adulterous husband thinks about her. Now that she has become naked in front of a traffic signal, she'll not care what the society thinks about her anymore....
Just a suggestion, to make the climax interesting and "righteous"
Excellent updates masalaman, each of those gems is excellent...
But poor Nilanjana is being harassed to the extremities, try being a little kinder, I pity this fictional woman.
By the way, I would suggest that when you want to end this story, please do it in such a way that the tables turn and Nilanjana has an upper hand somehow. I know it is difficult, but it must be just another challenge to your ingenious mind; just make sure that Nilanjana wins this war, and maybe you can make Vicky, Rohit and Ustad die a horrible, painful death, something like them getting their balls crushed or cut or something like that. Especially because you soon plan to include KumKum too in the problem, two women can defeat three men in this battle of wits, right?
Also, once kumkum gets involved, I am sure there is no obligation for Nilanjana to continue subservience. She is doing all this only for Kumkum, she'll not care anymore about whatever her adulterous husband thinks about her. Now that she has become naked in front of a traffic signal, she'll not care what the society thinks about her anymore....
Just a suggestion, to make the climax interesting and "righteous"
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