15-11-2022, 02:23 PM
(15-11-2022, 01:31 PM)lionkingback7669 Wrote: Pahle to itna accha review ke liye thanku....woh jitni bhi mere adhuri story rahi woh iska karan on demand reder ke according badana raha ...jisse story bhatak gayi.....par mai chaha kar bhi unko dubara wapisi nahi kara sakta I hope is story mai apko mere old story ka feel aaye .....yaha bus is story ka likhne ka karan yahi hai ek aurat bina sex ke kaise woh apne pati ke hone par bhi kaise bhatak jati hai ye wohi hai ....par isme aage acche dilouge delivery hai ....
Bhai main aapke time or ichcha ki kadar karta hu...... Bas ek dil ki ichcha thi to aapse share ki..... Or uska iklota reason shayad ye hai ki unn characters se ek judaav ho gya tha...... Par mujhe ummeed hai ki iss story ki nayika se bhi esa hi lagaav ho jaaega......??