15-11-2022, 01:31 PM
(15-11-2022, 12:37 PM)Fuckstar Wrote: Nayi story start krne pe Congratulations Bhai...... mujhe pta hai ye story bhi aapki puraani stories ki tarah bohot badhiya hogi..... par dukh bas iss baat ka hai ki aapne bola hai ki aap isko long story nahi banaaoge jabki hum sabhi readers jaante hai ki aapki writing itni kamaal hai ki jitni baar bhi pado dil nahi bharta..... Wese mene aapki puraani stories me se Hawas or Khoon, Harami Balam or Buddha Kaka or Bedaag haseena dubara padi abhi kuch din pehle kyuki xossipy pe koi achhi story thi hi nahi padne layak..... Or sach btaau to abhi bhi unka asar wesa hi tha jesa pehli baar padne me tha..... utna hi maza aaya..... Bhai aap apni purani stories me se inn teeno ko hi continue kar sakte ho kyuki ye teeno hi ese stage pe ruki hui hai jaha se story ko aage badhane ka bohot scope hai..... Baaki nayi story ke liye all the best Bhai..... Main ummeed krta hu ki Hume aapki pehle wali lekhni ka firse experience ho or ye story bhi lambi chale taaki aapki jo puraani stories adhuri reh gyi hai uska malaal kam ho jaai.....
Pahle to itna accha review ke liye thanku....woh jitni bhi mere adhuri story rahi woh iska karan on demand reder ke according badana raha ...jisse story bhatak gayi.....par mai chaha kar bhi unko dubara wapisi nahi kara sakta I hope is story mai apko mere old story ka feel aaye .....yaha bus is story ka likhne ka karan yahi hai ek aurat bina sex ke kaise woh apne pati ke hone par bhi kaise bhatak jati hai ye wohi hai ....par isme aage acche dilouge delivery hai ....