09-11-2022, 08:54 PM
(04-11-2022, 07:46 PM)Sitman Wrote: You are the gem of a writer. Each and every line written by you creating goosebumps. Here I want to share my fantasies related to the story. Devika should be persuaded to celebrate a birthday in an orphanage and situation can be created to expose her in the names of various activities viz. Kho kho game, murga party, kabaddi etc. Ganapati can also be associated with his dumbfounded vulgar wittiness.
Thanks for the appreciation and for the great suggestion. Will try to work on it