09-11-2022, 01:37 PM
(08-11-2022, 03:23 PM)Breeder4udders Wrote: Wonderful writing. Can't wait for what happens. Please update soon.
Just two suggestions. Divede the next two sexual encounters between Madhu and Kallu into two parts.
In the very next update - Make Madhuri reluctant about having Kallu cum inside her (fear of pregnancy) instead make Kallu deepthroat her swallow his seed/cum. Which she didn't last time.
In the next to next update. Make kammo arouse Madhu's maternal feelings so much that Maddu eventually but hesitantly starts craving and desire Kallu's seed/ignite her desire for breeding by kallu. Then when Kallu fucks Madhu. Make Madhu reluctant during sex but eventually loose to Kallu, dirty talk and get thick creampies straight into her woomb.
very nice idea