Misc. Erotica BASSSSS.. KARO ..(NAMRATA ek PAHELI)

[LovelyLover00]

It What an update bro. Hats off to you for your magnificent thinking and writing. The way you have expressed every word is so erotic that I red  every sentence twice. Simply amazing. 



Just my observation while going through the last few paragraphs: I believe that Birjus character was exceptionally good and he is the one who could have manipulated Namrita to an extreme level. Namrita was very scared of him yet very reluctant to say no to anything that Birju does to her. He could have easily kept using her and kept it a secret. As Birju was always a tharki and had tried on Namritas mom before, that could have spiced things up a lot. Whatever he was unable to do to Namritas mom, can do to Namrita and fulfil his lust. There was so much that Birju was able to do to her but now he’s dead.  

However, you are a master in writing erotica and must’ve something way better planned for Namu. Can’t wait to read where this story goes. 

Just a small request, do not make like a family incest sort of thing where we have seen it in earlier story. These sort of things are not real and does not happen very often. Try to keep the focus on Namrita with different low class older people. Just a suggestion. Please don’t mind. 

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

submissive jo ki most of ladki hoti hi hain, unhe koi pakad kar chodne wala chahiye aur woh thode nakhre kar ke chudwati rahti hai .