25-10-2022, 05:44 AM
(24-10-2022, 03:57 AM)Desmond Miles Wrote: What the fuck happened after the first page.. Were you on drugs while writing this, bro?? It was going so smooth with the reluctance and all the voyeur son thing at the beginning. Then Suddenly you took it to a quick and horrible ending with unwanted turn of events.. Disappointed! The last story was even better than this..
Ha ha ha... its a short story buddy.