Adultery A Wife's Aerola (Pinjre Mein Band Chidya ) Saga

[Okrem]

                  Season 2 ( Demo)

 Chapter 4 (Chidya Chugh Gayi Keth)

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Ek Taraf ek ganda kala aur 2 koodi ka chokidaar aur dosri taraf ek e ghar ke saaf shfaaf izzatdaar garaane ke paak damun auraten,, ek samboogh ke anand mein apne bister peh ulti lehti howi neend ki aagoosh mein tript thi ,,tho dosri apne bed peh late kar chatt ki taraf dekhte howe jealousy mein julas rahi thi,, gumsum sirf apne saath howe guzre lamhon ko baar baar kudko yaad dila rahi thi, 

Uski dimaag mein woh saare lahme guzarne lagte hain jiss waqt balraj aur shamsher uske samne aankh uta kar nahen dekhte the aur jab dekhne lage the tho sirf ek aasss ki nigahon se dekhte the, unn lamhon mein uzra koi howi thi jinn lamhon mein uzra un donon peh aaawi ochuki thi ,jinn lamhon mein uzra apne app ko dominent mehsoos kar chuki thi, 

jahan se inn sab ki shuruhaat howi, 

Uzra apne mann mein yeh the kar chuki thi ki woh apni didi aur saans ki tara mardon ke samne nahen jukegi balke mardon ko jukahegi, uzra apne masoniyat ke chalte in kuch dinon bohot kuch samajh chuki thi, sochte sochte uzra ko kabhi utejetna tho kabhi guilt ,tho kabhi jealous mehssoos kar rahi thi,, 

Leken kya joh woh soch rahi thi woh balraj aur shamsher jese darindon ke samne kaam karegi, kya shamsher aur balraj uzra ke samne phirse gutne teekhne mein majboor osakenge,,,?????????????????????

Update Next Week Till Now Sorry For The Wait,,

Regards:

Wofy,

Best Story.
I have some suggestions.
Uzra ko abhi slut mat banao. Uzra ko apni izzat kuch time aur bacahe rehne do. Jo Uzra ne Balraj ke saath kiya use Uzra ka khwab (dream) bata do. Uzra ko dheere dheere kholo. Jis aurat ne apni saari zindagi apna chehra kisi ko nahi dikhaya wo ek baar me hi sex kaise kar legi. Jab bhi ghar me kaam hota hai Uzra apne kamre me hi band rehti hai. 
Pehle doosre logo ke samne Uzra ka chehra kholo, phir baal and so on. Aise hi dheere dheere character build karo to ye story unbeatable ho jaegi. 
Jab koi character kuch daring kare to uska thought process bhi bata diya karo to bht accha rahega. Jaise jab Akma, Uzra se mafi maang leti hai. Phir agle din molvi ke samne bina chehra (face) cover liye jati hai to Uzra notice karti hai. Isme agar Akmas ka thought process bhi bataya gaya hota to bht accha hota.
Kuch naye characters introduce ho sakte hain, jaise molvi ki wife etc.
Aur last ye ke jo images lagate ho usme character us time pr jo kapde pehni hui hai image me bhi wahi kapde houn. Ye character ki us time pe figure dikhane se behtar hoga.
Thank-you.