Misc. Erotica Shwetha - My Sweet and Sour Wife

[Desmond Miles]

Bro, not trying to discourage you. But you should stop involving Vishal or his friends again, as its too repetitive now. And if you can, ignore Balu the driver too. This should be an erotic cuckold story, not a forced sex and crime thriller or something like that. Add new situations like she slowly falling for another person, like the nightclub part, and let her dumbness take her to do the things happen afterwards. If you can't do that, the readers will easily get bored of this story as its predictable now with repetitive scenes..
Good luck