19-10-2022, 03:38 PM
You are absolutely wonderful in your writings but I list some suggestions for you to incorporate in your future writings...
Take your story slow.....Try to write scences that deeply describe the scenario.....
Include conversation as much as possible.....
Try to write introspective prospects of female lead character....Her state of mind in different situations....How she believes that she is doing right...
You can also add kinkiness in controlled manner....
Try to stick one female character and limited numbers of male characters..... Don't overcrowd male characters....
Rest
You are the best......
Take your story slow.....Try to write scences that deeply describe the scenario.....
Include conversation as much as possible.....
Try to write introspective prospects of female lead character....Her state of mind in different situations....How she believes that she is doing right...
You can also add kinkiness in controlled manner....
Try to stick one female character and limited numbers of male characters..... Don't overcrowd male characters....
Rest
You are the best......