Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

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To be honest I doubt there is anything in Krish's hand now after the fall. It  is a two storey fall and it will be serious. He also went against meera and tried to sneek in.  So the decision will be of Meera now. She is the one who takes firm decisions in their relationship. She is the one who avoids desai and tells krish  when they should meet desai even if krish wants to meet desai early.

She has taken drastic decisions when something bad has happened. I am sure she will take some drastic decision now when krish is injured. The decision may not be against krish because she will never leave krish when he is hurt (specially when he is physically hurt). I dont think she will care what desai thinks or wants or about their sexual intimacy when krish is physically hurt. Even though krish made a mistake to sneak on them, Meera will be with krish to take care of him and think about their life and future. Yes once krish is out of danger then she might think about desai... but until krish is fine she will not think of anything apart from taking care of him...

Desai: What all he has done and behaved till not and what all he has planed till now( manipulating krish and meera; planning to send krish away from meera for a month to mumbai; planning to have a foreign trip with meera for honeymoon and his plan to take meera fir his home town vacation) He is clever and he will understand the situation and will definitely take advantage of this situation. He will forget the sex with Meera and try to impress the couple by taking care of krish and consoling Meera during this difficult time. Once krish is out of danger he will try to spend more time with meera and try to take her away..... Not sure when will Krish and Meera think of their life and future and try to think that desai might be manipulating them instead of thinking that he is a changed man because of them..  They used to always doubt his actions and think or doubt about his every move before; dont know why they started to blindly belive him now. PS: Desai might even have sex with meera in the hospital room where krish is admitted right infront of krish. I doubt Meera will do this. She broke off with Das when she knew that krish was hurt after she had sex with das in front of Das as revenge after she caught Krish with Ananya even when they were in breakup.

Few disappointments on how story is moving forward

1. Last few chapters are going the way krish thinks with his dick..... It is going exactly how he wants to get aroused. Before other factor had a say. What meera wants,  what she thinks, what other character wants, what people around them think. These all used to influence the story but now its all about what excites krish's which is what his dick feels.

2. Social factors: The author added slight social factor where Venkat saw meera with Desai and raised it with Krish. Meera said she will never ever repeat such a thing but immediately next she went alone with desai to hotel and spent time alone with desai in hotel room. This does not make any sense when she said she will never repeat such a thing. She should have never been alone with desai without krish if she said she will never ever repeat what happened last time.

3. Professional Aspirations: There is no professional update of meera and professional future about krish. Yes krish did mention about leaving desai's security services but there is nothing concrete he is thinking about his professional life. Meera who always wanted krish to be out of desai's shadow in professional matter was silent when krish said desai's offer of pune branch to krish. Ideally she would have opposed it to so that krish is independent.

4. Family, Friends and relatives: There is no mention of family, friends and  relatives except of desai's parents in last few updates. There is no influence or effect of families from Krish and Meera. Yes the last mention was of Meera's mother passing away. But apart from that there is no mention of friends family and caretakers of Meera and Krish.

5. Neighbours and apartment society: So much happening in the house and not anything from neighbours and society. In last society even security guard were watching and had a role. In this society they heard few things when desai had anal sex and lot of noise was there but after nothing.....

6. Nidhi/her mother and boyfriend: What is their role in this story? Till now there is no connection.

Sorry Krish to raise so many things. But just wanted to put down my thoughts.. I dont want them to be in my mind; I just wanted them to be out in the open. I know story writing is not easy. It is a huge task to take all things into consideration. Story writing is an art and a beautiful journey in itself where you keep audience hooked. The amount of comments and discussions you are getting on this story itself speaks for you work. You have an amazing talent to have so many viewers hooked and involved in your story. Thank you for this.