05-10-2022, 03:11 PM
As many have said in Literotica... The plot is promising but the grammatical mistake and paragraph layout causes people to avoid this story. Hope you correct the mistakes and continue
Romance A girl on a Ship
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A girl on a Ship - by BdO!nap@jrQ - 22-09-2022, 04:54 PM
RE: A girl on a Ship - by listener098 - 05-10-2022, 03:11 PM
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