24-09-2022, 10:27 AM
(20-09-2022, 09:34 PM)hotmariner1512 Wrote: Hi bro as usual u gave us the best weekend gift and dhika is evolving herself into something hot but this episode I felt something missing not from dhikas character but from u , the josh in ur writing was missing I felt it in this one or maybe it was just my feeling , I missed the way u put out each n every episode in this wonderful story , it maybe due to time constraint or u felt the need to give an update this week I was thinkin it maybe due to that but I loved the way u have moved forward with the story and waiting for the erotic comeback from u
Yes.. I think in this last update the scene are end abruptly or finished quickly..may be this is happening bcz of focusing or thinking story of John point of view..
In writing these big updates and story sometime it happened..