16-09-2022, 06:39 PM
(16-09-2022, 10:50 AM)Desmond Miles Wrote: Nice update, bro. Loved the sneaky quickie under the table. Need more like that, with some 'mayo' showing up at the end too!
Although I like the way you narrate Manisha's story, I don't really think its doing a good job of deviating from the Patel girl's plot. It could he better if you focus on Manisha at a later portion of the story rather than now. Just my opinion.
Good luck again, bro!
I agree with your point of view and let me assure you that the priority will be given to the Patels and Manisha will follow up later gradually.
Be tuned