16-09-2022, 10:50 AM
Nice update, bro. Loved the sneaky quickie under the table. Need more like that, with some 'mayo' showing up at the end too!
Although I like the way you narrate Manisha's story, I don't really think its doing a good job of deviating from the Patel girl's plot. It could he better if you focus on Manisha at a later portion of the story rather than now. Just my opinion.
Good luck again, bro!
Although I like the way you narrate Manisha's story, I don't really think its doing a good job of deviating from the Patel girl's plot. It could he better if you focus on Manisha at a later portion of the story rather than now. Just my opinion.
Good luck again, bro!