13-09-2022, 09:30 PM
Dear author
I have listed your update dates vs chapter nos. Initial 8 chapters were minuscule and could be be placed under 2 chapters.
Even ignoring the contents, the time gaps between chapters got enormously increased.
Chapter 28: Adjusting To The New Arrangements
12-08-2022, 02:50 PM
Chapter 27: Maintenance of balance between marriage and affair
27-07-2022, 05:27 PM
Chapter 26: Two timing with husband and lover
24-06-2022, 02:43 PM
Chapter 25: A New Turn Of Events
17-06-2022, 02:21 PM
Chapter 24: The Extra Marital Encounter
10-06-2022, 04:08 PM
Chapter 23: More Manipulations
02-06-2022, 04:32 PM
Chapter 22: Sexual Manipulation
27-05-2022, 02:25 PM
Chapter 21: Sexual Reunion With A Blowjob
20-05-2022, 02:38 PM
Chapter 20: WIFE WINS A BET
12-05-2022, 12:18 PM
Chapter 19: THE WAR: WILL THE MARRIAGE BREAK UP?
06-05-2022, 02:57 PM
Chapter 18: THE RETURN OF THE LOVING WIFE
29-04-2022, 02:58 PM
Chapter 17: Valentine's Day Mystery and The Divorce Options
22-04-2022, 03:57 PM
Chapter 16: Loving Wife Lost
16-04-2022, 09:12 PM
Chapter 15: A ***** Family and Divorce Lawyer
11-04-2022, 01:16 PM
Chapter 14: More Flashbacks
05-04-2022, 02:28 PM
Chapter 13: Hot Wife Elopement With a Flashback
01-04-2022, 12:16 AM
Chapter 12: A Slut Wife With Enemies Posing As Friends
28-03-2022, 07:56 PM
Chapter 11: The End of a Marriage or The Beginning of a New Extra Marital Affair?
24-03-2022, 10:42 PM
Chapter 10: The Final Crushing Humiliating Defeat Leading to Complete Submission.
21-03-2022, 04:47 PM
Chapter 9 : A Very Hot Steamy Spicy Raunchy Sexual Encounter
18-03-2022, 12:08 AM
Chapter 8: The Slow Sensuous Seduction
15-03-2022, 07:45 PM
Chapter 7: The Beginning
13-03-2022, 09:52 PM
Chapter 5: The Initiation
10-03-2022, 08:58 PM
Chapter 4: The Anticipation
09-03-2022, 12:50 PM
Chapter 3: The Preparation
07-03-2022, 01:37 PM
Chapter 2: The Confrontation
04-03-2022, 02:38 PM
Chapter 1: The Party
03-03-2022, 05:42 PM
I agree, you have taken up very difficult task of rewriting a famous story. Though difficult, may not be impossible.
In case you find it impossible to complete the story, please inform.
Please respect readers patience and you dignity.
I have listed your update dates vs chapter nos. Initial 8 chapters were minuscule and could be be placed under 2 chapters.
Even ignoring the contents, the time gaps between chapters got enormously increased.
Chapter 28: Adjusting To The New Arrangements
12-08-2022, 02:50 PM
Chapter 27: Maintenance of balance between marriage and affair
27-07-2022, 05:27 PM
Chapter 26: Two timing with husband and lover
24-06-2022, 02:43 PM
Chapter 25: A New Turn Of Events
17-06-2022, 02:21 PM
Chapter 24: The Extra Marital Encounter
10-06-2022, 04:08 PM
Chapter 23: More Manipulations
02-06-2022, 04:32 PM
Chapter 22: Sexual Manipulation
27-05-2022, 02:25 PM
Chapter 21: Sexual Reunion With A Blowjob
20-05-2022, 02:38 PM
Chapter 20: WIFE WINS A BET
12-05-2022, 12:18 PM
Chapter 19: THE WAR: WILL THE MARRIAGE BREAK UP?
06-05-2022, 02:57 PM
Chapter 18: THE RETURN OF THE LOVING WIFE
29-04-2022, 02:58 PM
Chapter 17: Valentine's Day Mystery and The Divorce Options
22-04-2022, 03:57 PM
Chapter 16: Loving Wife Lost
16-04-2022, 09:12 PM
Chapter 15: A ***** Family and Divorce Lawyer
11-04-2022, 01:16 PM
Chapter 14: More Flashbacks
05-04-2022, 02:28 PM
Chapter 13: Hot Wife Elopement With a Flashback
01-04-2022, 12:16 AM
Chapter 12: A Slut Wife With Enemies Posing As Friends
28-03-2022, 07:56 PM
Chapter 11: The End of a Marriage or The Beginning of a New Extra Marital Affair?
24-03-2022, 10:42 PM
Chapter 10: The Final Crushing Humiliating Defeat Leading to Complete Submission.
21-03-2022, 04:47 PM
Chapter 9 : A Very Hot Steamy Spicy Raunchy Sexual Encounter
18-03-2022, 12:08 AM
Chapter 8: The Slow Sensuous Seduction
15-03-2022, 07:45 PM
Chapter 7: The Beginning
13-03-2022, 09:52 PM
Chapter 5: The Initiation
10-03-2022, 08:58 PM
Chapter 4: The Anticipation
09-03-2022, 12:50 PM
Chapter 3: The Preparation
07-03-2022, 01:37 PM
Chapter 2: The Confrontation
04-03-2022, 02:38 PM
Chapter 1: The Party
03-03-2022, 05:42 PM
I agree, you have taken up very difficult task of rewriting a famous story. Though difficult, may not be impossible.
In case you find it impossible to complete the story, please inform.
Please respect readers patience and you dignity.