10-09-2022, 06:26 PM
Very nice update. Narrating skill of writer is awesome. Each and every update become hot cake. Every time I read each episode as soon as updated. Also revise the update time to time. Story narrated in the view from Krish only. So unable to know what the pov of other characters. Desai now fulfill all his dream and dominate both Krish and Meera. Both of them become pawn of Desai. Though Desai show himself as friend and well wisher for Krish but his action looks like he take revenge on Krish for his earlier insults made by Krish. Only writer will tell in future what is Desai's actual moto. What is the importance of Parvati Nidhi and Piyush character is not yet clear.
First two encounter of Desai and Meera was narrated by Desai to Krish. Next one he got the seen through mobile via voice only. Next may be Desai make a live show for Krish. Hope for the same.
Krish is a great writer. He knows how to make the writing attractive. Each episode end in such way that it is incomplete. Few more line is required for reader satisfaction.
First two encounter of Desai and Meera was narrated by Desai to Krish. Next one he got the seen through mobile via voice only. Next may be Desai make a live show for Krish. Hope for the same.
Krish is a great writer. He knows how to make the writing attractive. Each episode end in such way that it is incomplete. Few more line is required for reader satisfaction.