05-09-2022, 09:36 PM
(05-09-2022, 11:53 AM)jobut Wrote: You have destroyed Shalini's character even at the begining which another writer developed with utmost care. You have already made Shalini into lusty.
you have no right to destroy other writer's story like this. Start your own story and do as you want, but do not spoil this super developed character.
Original writer developed her lust little by little, see within a few episeodes, you have exposed her to many men.... what da hell idiot,
If i had an option i would report you.... do not spoil this story idiot....
If you don't like then don't read it bro.
He is writing on his version there are so many stories like this with different versions with different writers.
He is doing all this in his free time and giving us update we have to respect him for his work.
Not everyone in this site like all genres, versions and plots if we liked the story just give like rate and comment else just avoid that's it...These are all just for the free time to relax and stress free....