05-09-2022, 09:11 PM
The best thing about this reading this story is there's no over emotional episodes no bullshit cunning plans. It feels sooo fresh and pleasent reading this those. Those little naughty things Dhika do always brings a smile on my face...i love that naughtiness mixed with innocence.
Your doing right by not hurrying in order to get Dikha fucked by other person besides her husband. Keep this slow and steady style of building the story.
For me Dikhas scenes with Raj and shamsi won't give excitement as that kind of stories are already there and it's not new. I know that scenes are necessary from story point of view. It's just my opinion that scenes with Raj are not exciting.
Dihkas scenes with uncle twins and chotu are more exciting and more enjoyable. I suggest you to write more scenes with them if possible.
All the best ??
Your doing right by not hurrying in order to get Dikha fucked by other person besides her husband. Keep this slow and steady style of building the story.
For me Dikhas scenes with Raj and shamsi won't give excitement as that kind of stories are already there and it's not new. I know that scenes are necessary from story point of view. It's just my opinion that scenes with Raj are not exciting.
Dihkas scenes with uncle twins and chotu are more exciting and more enjoyable. I suggest you to write more scenes with them if possible.
All the best ??
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