05-09-2022, 04:29 AM
Well, seems like an interesting turn of events. Still too early to say whether it’s a good thing or bad so I'd rather just let the story unfold.
Have to say this though, this Piyush character, with his build-up till now, is not adding any erotic substance to the storyline. He doesn’t have any actual chemistry with Meera and neither we see him arousing Krish's fantasy from his point of view. In fact, Krish seems kinda aghast to it. At this point, this Piyush is kinda like the irritating pervy nerd of the group everyone would rather be rid of.
During the discussion between the last chapter and this one, someone said about, not to make predictions because that might force the author to stray from his original thinking to avoid those. I agree with that, although the author might not necessarily do that. In this update, there was one thing I really liked, that hinted towards something. Although, reading the previous stories, I'd rather let the story unfold.
Since the author has left the story hanging in the middle of a tense situation, I hope he provides the next chapter very soon.
Have to say this though, this Piyush character, with his build-up till now, is not adding any erotic substance to the storyline. He doesn’t have any actual chemistry with Meera and neither we see him arousing Krish's fantasy from his point of view. In fact, Krish seems kinda aghast to it. At this point, this Piyush is kinda like the irritating pervy nerd of the group everyone would rather be rid of.
During the discussion between the last chapter and this one, someone said about, not to make predictions because that might force the author to stray from his original thinking to avoid those. I agree with that, although the author might not necessarily do that. In this update, there was one thing I really liked, that hinted towards something. Although, reading the previous stories, I'd rather let the story unfold.
Since the author has left the story hanging in the middle of a tense situation, I hope he provides the next chapter very soon.