25-08-2022, 12:04 PM
(25-08-2022, 07:54 AM)oscarpistorious Wrote: Bhai I enjoyed your story a lot but only till it was between savla and birju.... instead of prequel it would have been nice if u would have written it's sequel and savla would have got a fair chance to fuck namarta the way birju got the chance...
Even I thought the same but then I thought if story had revolved around namrata and savla then story would had become predictable.And its sequel in safar saga the bike seduction scene was one of the best erotic scene ever.And even in prequel the conversation between raga and namrata were good too.so it was good choice by writer.