24-08-2022, 12:13 AM
(20-08-2022, 02:10 PM)Explorer@life Wrote: Superb.. superb...This is called erotic and sensual writing at peak...
Easily one of best...
You nailed it bhai..
This is just like birju and namrta in zopdi scene..
Hope this would have little longer...
You are easily top writer in this platform..
Fantastic..
Don't make this character easily convince..thoda bahut sabko taste krne .Do..
Waiting to her encounter with safai wala old men..
And also gafur bhai..
Make it more sensual and seductive..
Once again thanks Bhai..
It's greedy but eagerly waiting for another update..
Hoping for another sensual episode with.. cleaner in hospital..
I hope you will give good news soon but gentle request make it little longer than this ..
Take care...
You rocks Bhai..
Thank you sooo much brother
Ek acche writer ke sath acche readers ka bhi hona jaruri hain and aap unme se ek ho , thanks
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