22-08-2022, 03:50 PM
(22-08-2022, 02:30 PM)Ajanmol Wrote: Bohot sundar likh rahe ho aap bhai....or sach mai yeh talent aapko uparwaale ne badhiya sa diya hai....or aapke fan bhi bhut detailed mai complement dete hai jisse ek writer ko motivation milta hai.....isi tarah aage bhi likhte raho bhai...
Bhai apki Vandana Vali story bhi awesome hai..
You can say top notch...
Aap bhi.. use soon continue Karo...
Apki writing bhi ... badhiyaa hai...
Just you have to add more..Gif.. and pics to make moments more realistic ..
Use feeel badh jata hai story ka...
All the best for that..