[Paul5]

Thank you very much for the update Krish. It was worth waiting but felt it ended very soon.
Going by first part again entering of new character in story piyush, still I feel new characters not required at this stages but anyhow author know very well. Is they any angle here now don't know may be Meera - piyush etc my suggestion kindly avoid it
Next part - Krish  and Parvati angle frankly looked disgusting to me , first of of all not required he had many chances with maitreyi, ananya and all, he didn't fall for that now he is going for parvathi no, not Krish nature. You can't take advantage of any person because u had helped them in their needs. Then there is no difference between Krish and older devil Desai.
Krish and nidhi part was erotic but again fel the same as above
Now coming to main part there was so less between Meera and Desai in this chapter. One thing is observed Krish is gradually leaving Meera to go out of his grasp. Especially in temple, in bus etc. Those are not the places of sex or private place , it's public one. Those are the places where the husband should be with his wife, protecting her guiding her making her feel he is there but Krish is now leaving everything to Desai that's the most dangerous part. In the madness of his sex he is loosing Meera love too.
Comig to sex again biggest revel, One Meera jealousy for Desai she was getting disturbed when Krish teased her and she is getting possesive for desain now. This will definitely increase her love for Desai. Next is her private discussion with Desai which was revealed over phone call, he is talking to desai behind Krish. They discussed and had everything planned. As soon as they entered their home Desai hold on to Meera and she also obliged to him. They started to live on to their desires.
Just felt that sex started with anal portion directly, no teasing, no games nothing which was very disappointing this time. This is the main essence which increases erotica which was not at all there not even basic love making also before going to anal.  
Desai phone call revealed many things , Meera action behind Krish , her sexual desires etc . Also why Desai is doing thi, is it only soft corner for Krish such that he can enjoy his cuckyness or Desai want to create rift between the couple. Please add more action to night don't close so early let Krish hear more of Meera and her sexual beastness in bed with Desai. Make it more erotic , more talks between Desai and Meera during sex.
Desai is not only aiming the sex with Meera he is making her feel special during sex also such that and increasing her love towards him. He is taking her into his cacoon.

Thanks and regards

You r absulataly right bro Krish pl create any situation Krish listen more erotic nd romantic talks between there sex sessions it's becoming story more interesting ?? Even i become hard to asume this situation