19-08-2022, 05:20 PM
(17-08-2022, 10:24 PM)Lollobionda Wrote: Hello friend,
long time since I commented on your story (which I love to follow and read!).
I just waited for the right time point....
Your writing style is different, that makes the story different and more interesting,
(although some passages are repetitions and partly boring!) but still makes it always
fun to wait for the new abdate to read it.
... and I do it with love and joy !!!
I like the innocent and hesitant erotic thought processes respectively games with the uncle
and find them very charming and erotic, much more than what the "childish twins", are doing.
Perhaps you should integrate for the two brothers, a new playmate in the story, because
the Dhika is three number too big for them...
In this sense
All the best and greetings from Berlin-Germany
Lollobionda
Thanks for your comments and critics.
Regarding new playmates as opposed to the teens: Soon ; )
Few are yet to start their play; A precious few are yet to make their presence.
Happy Reading...