18-08-2022, 12:25 AM
I would like to say this in advance;
This story (despite the last chapters) is still my favourite ... and always enjoy reading it....
My respect goes to the author Krish ...
I like fantasies that are close to reality, but ...
only if I can somehow feel a realistic connection to the plot and/or the characters.
(That connection was there, until recently. And now it's partly gone astray, alas!)
The limits of my imagination are very much stretched and blown with the last (3 - 4) chapters.
The main problem here is, (cuckold this and cuckold that!) that I cannot remotely imagine a husband,
(Krish in this case) who supposedly cares for his wife, (and supposedly loves and cherishes her very much)
could ever do something so reckless, so dangerous, so rash, so stupid as is portrayed (especially
in the final ramblings between Desai and Meera) in the "new" course of story...
I'm still confident because;
Krish first felt a pang of jealousy (since the breakup with Meera back then) when he saw Nidhu with
her boyfriend and then her swollen lips.
I wish that carries over to his Meera and her relationship with Desai...
Kind regards from Berlin-Germany
Lollobionda
This story (despite the last chapters) is still my favourite ... and always enjoy reading it....
My respect goes to the author Krish ...
I like fantasies that are close to reality, but ...
only if I can somehow feel a realistic connection to the plot and/or the characters.
(That connection was there, until recently. And now it's partly gone astray, alas!)
The limits of my imagination are very much stretched and blown with the last (3 - 4) chapters.
The main problem here is, (cuckold this and cuckold that!) that I cannot remotely imagine a husband,
(Krish in this case) who supposedly cares for his wife, (and supposedly loves and cherishes her very much)
could ever do something so reckless, so dangerous, so rash, so stupid as is portrayed (especially
in the final ramblings between Desai and Meera) in the "new" course of story...
I'm still confident because;
Krish first felt a pang of jealousy (since the breakup with Meera back then) when he saw Nidhu with
her boyfriend and then her swollen lips.
I wish that carries over to his Meera and her relationship with Desai...
Kind regards from Berlin-Germany
Lollobionda