01-08-2022, 02:18 AM
Hello Krish,
There is one request. The whole story is a narration of Krish, he narrates the whole story. In between he also also shares his point of view of every action and every incident that has taken place along with what he wants to happen against what has actually happened. What he thinks others think again what others actually think.
Most important is with Meera. He thinks many versions of what Meera thinks and does againt what has actually happened. In every step or action that Meera takes or does Krish has his own version in his mind. This is not limited to Meera; he does with every one and in this part majority is with Desai a most important ones he does with Meera.
Can there be similar updates with Meera? Meera's version of everything that is happening in the story. I know a detailed version of narration from Meera's point of view will be an another complete version of this whole story. But can you give us a small part of Meera's version in critical period during this story. It will be very much interesting. You have already done this to some extent in perilous parts (during their seperation there was always what meera thinks along with Krish's versio) and to very less or limited in 3 part. Please think of this. If you feel it is worth adding then it will help readers understand more about Meera
Currently majority readers have different opinions about Meera's actions (mainly negative) and charter because there is no her point of view and what she is about and how things are going with her narration. We should know what she is thinking in all that is happening in this story. Please consider this if you think it is worth adding new dimension to the story.
Krish and Meera and equal in the story so both Krish's Version and Meera's Version is important.
Thank You.
There is one request. The whole story is a narration of Krish, he narrates the whole story. In between he also also shares his point of view of every action and every incident that has taken place along with what he wants to happen against what has actually happened. What he thinks others think again what others actually think.
Most important is with Meera. He thinks many versions of what Meera thinks and does againt what has actually happened. In every step or action that Meera takes or does Krish has his own version in his mind. This is not limited to Meera; he does with every one and in this part majority is with Desai a most important ones he does with Meera.
Can there be similar updates with Meera? Meera's version of everything that is happening in the story. I know a detailed version of narration from Meera's point of view will be an another complete version of this whole story. But can you give us a small part of Meera's version in critical period during this story. It will be very much interesting. You have already done this to some extent in perilous parts (during their seperation there was always what meera thinks along with Krish's versio) and to very less or limited in 3 part. Please think of this. If you feel it is worth adding then it will help readers understand more about Meera
Currently majority readers have different opinions about Meera's actions (mainly negative) and charter because there is no her point of view and what she is about and how things are going with her narration. We should know what she is thinking in all that is happening in this story. Please consider this if you think it is worth adding new dimension to the story.
Krish and Meera and equal in the story so both Krish's Version and Meera's Version is important.
Thank You.
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