25-05-2019, 03:07 PM
Awesome update buddy, very arousing you have really good skills with the plot, environment and story telling, thankyou very much for a wonderful update. I also a request for other readers that please don't try to influence the story this early like who will be good with whom, let the writer express what he initially set out to do. Once the story is in with first few scenes then writer can take suggestion if i wants. If the writer asked for suggestions in the first place then i apologizes. In any case i would like to request writer that he goes forward with what he has in his mind first and take suggestion later if he wants. Anyhow thanks again for a wonderful update, keep it up.