20-07-2022, 05:08 PM
(20-07-2022, 04:19 PM)Pmrrao Wrote: Bhai title se true love kaise soch lia aur writer ne koi hint nai di love ki ulta Kabir ko harami hi bataya hai pehle din se. .Kabir ko pyaar hota toh jab gaurd se karwai toh bura feel hota par usko maza aayi aur security officer wale ko offer bhi Kabir ne hi dia..
Aur Sulochana ke pyaar ka chance hi nai jaise uska pati aayega wo guilt me jayega.
Writer line pe hi hai tum thoda bhatak gaye.
Ye story 1st update se utni hi jabardast hai jitni ab hai.
Jabardast hai usse koi inkar nahi kar sakta tabhi mai 2 din me pad liya...
Story ko thoda lineup karna chaiye aur ek main character rhena chaiye.... Mummy ke sath aur plot me bataya gaya mummy ki 10 month me liye posting ho sakti hai to usme sochna chaiye aur mera ye khena hai mummy ke. Standard ko dhiyan dena chaiye taki kare par ache se kare club wagera ye wo