Misc. Erotica BASSSSS.. KARO ..(NAMRATA ek PAHELI)

[rehanboy16]

DEAR READERS...

HELLO READERS ROYALKING HERE ...

I KNOW YE KAHANI KAFI DINO SE THAM CHUKI HAIN KOI UPDATE NAHI KOI INFORMATION NAHI AUR ISKE LIYE ME JIMMEDAR HU ...BUT ISS KAHANI KO STOP KARNE KA KOI INTENTION NAHI THA KUCH PERSONAL ISSUES AND PROBLEMS KI VAJAH SE YE KAHANI KE UPDATE ROK DIYE GAYE ...

AUR ABHI BHI AS A WRITER MAIN ISS KAHANI SE KAFI KARIB HU THIS IS MY FIRST STORY SO IT'S HAVE SPECIAL FEELING FOR ME BUT FILHAL ISS KAHANI KO MAIN KHATAM ANNOUNCED KARTA HU I KNOW AAGE PLOT THA BUT AS A WRITER I HAVE REQUEST TO YOU KAHANI KA LAST CHAPTER SAFAR TAK ISKO ENJOY KIJIYE AND NAMRATA KE ENCOUNTER KE BAD IT'S ENDED ......

THIS IS NOT PROPER ENDING BUT KAHANI KAHA END HOGI YE MUJHE BHI NAHI PATA AAP SAB NE ISS KAHANI KO SPECIAL BANAYA AUR ITNA PYAR DIYA USKE LIYE DHANYAWAD

FILHAL I AM THINKING ABOUT NEW STORY AGAR KUCH IRADA HUVA TOH JALD HE BATAVUNGA 

Really heartbreaking to see this story ending so abruptly. It was my favourite story, a true masterclass. Never have I ever checked any other story on a regular basis for any update. 
In my pint of view, the encounter with DSP could’ve been replaced with Birju and Savla with more extended updates. And in between she is being used by Birju and Savla, you could have showed highlights of her past with her teacher and then from there on that would have been further unwrapped as her past. 

It’s your story overall and despite all, I want to say thank you for writing this amazing story. You are a great writer of erotica.