03-07-2022, 11:25 PM
Keep it up buddy,It is one of my favourite story,Have already read the same plot and story line on literotica few years back. Even charactors are same.But the original author has stopped writting further. Dont dissappoint us like him We are not accusing you of copying him. Rather encouraging to write more. Your beginning is good, can add some elements of own imagination by making it even more vulgar or adding some new roles, but dont get Diverted Complelty from actual Stream.